Sample Writings

I am a percussionist and music is very important to me. That is why one of my greatest achievements is becoming drumline captain of my school’s marching band. When I joined the drumline freshman year, the captain of the line amazed me. I wanted to be on his level and have that much skill. I had only been playing the drums for two years at that point and it is safe to say I needed some work. Last year though, I was given the title of drumline captain. I might not necessarily be on my old captain’s level but this showed me I was improving. It showed me that all of my hard work and determination was paying off. I now know that trying your hardest at things is definitely worth it in the end and I believe I’m now a more diligent person. I will always try my hardest at anything I participate in.

George Herbert wrote, "One father is more than a hundred schoolemasters." I believe this to be one hundred percent true. My dad has been a huge influence on me and has provided guidance all throughout my life. He has taught me that being honest and virtuous are the most important things in life. Because of him, I am definitely a better person and much less likely to lie, cheat, or do anything that could harm others. The morals he has instilled into me will carry me far in life and help me succeed in anything I do.

The subject of cloning is very important to me. It definitely has its benefits but there are ethical problems with it as well. It could lead to great medical advantages. We could learn more about many types of diseases and help with transplants. On the other side, it could lead to things like an illegal fetus trade or genetic problems that we know nothing about.

If I attended UNO, I know I would have a great experience. The university has many great things to offer me, especially because I'm interested in the field of engineering. After talking to some of the staff members, I knkow that the Peter Kewitt Institute sets up students with great internships. I hear that the institute is a great place for engineering students. Also, UNO is in my hometown which would make everything easier. It is just a great choice overall.